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May 30, 2008

2nd Draft of My Office Spec

Here it is, rewritten. I think this version is much improved, much tighter. It also removes Ryan from the scenes (since he's been arrested), and trims 2 pages off the page count, which is important.

If you'd like to read it, here it is.

Posted by jason on May 30, 2008 05:48 PM

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