Another review from Garageband.com
It's taking forever, but finally got another review (at this rate, we'll get all 20 by 2007). . .

Cool
Beginning is nice. Drums sound very good. Vocals are clear which is good. Good hook in the chorus. Pretty good production, but maybe bring the electric guitar up a little more in the chorus with a little less acoustic guitar. I don't know who this sounds like. This is solid musically. Could use some back-up, harmony in chorus on the vocals.
Extra Credit: Male Vocals, Drums, Beat.

Good review, and I agree that it could use a harmony on the chorus. One nice thing is that when you do a review, you can optionally give a song extra credit for something you think is especially good. .. and this reviewer gave David and me some love!