Monday, August 08, 2005

Leaving LA

My time here is coming to an end, we're flying home on Tuesday. I'm really going to miss it out here. You can't tire of the weather, nor all of the wonderful places to visit. And there is just something dramatic about seeing beautiful mountains and the ocean everyday.

In terms of the school itself, it was completely worth it, perhaps even bordering on a smashing success.

My TA said that by far my script was the best in the class, very smart and compelling and imaginative. He encouraged me to hurry up and finish it because he would help me refine it, then pass it onto Professor Walter and his manager. Of course, both of these prospects are incredible. Professor Walter gets paid tens of thousands of dollars to read scripts and punch them up for the studios – he does not read his students scripts, only the 1 or 2 that are the best in the class – and finding an agent or manager is the first step towards having a legitimate Hollywood career.

So now I'm killing myself to finish this thing. I've done 55 pages, and I'm pretty excited about where it is now. When I'm cruising, I write maybe a page an hour. And I already know where the story is going. It's more like sculpting that writing sometimes. Putting words on paper, deleting them, reforming them, testing them and discarding them or keeping them. Reading through what you did the day before and running them through the filter again. And then making sure that the world you're creating sticks together. Are the characters actions consistent, are there logical gaps in the story, are there holes in the plot? Then you find a place where the answer is no and have to work to fix that up.

Realistically though, even if it's awesome (and I do think it's getting there), it probably won't get made. That's just the probabilities. Most screenplays written never get sold. Most that are sold are never greenlit. Most greenlit are never filmed. Many that are filmed are not completed. And many that are completed never get released, or receive no marketing or promotional push when they do.

But at the same time, I can dream. And so far things do seem to falling into place. At the very least, I'm inspired to write.

In my experimental film class, the instructor requested that I give her a copy of my final film, because she thought it was "incredible what I accomplished in just 6 weeks," and that my film was so "ambitious in its subject matter, worked on so many levels, and elicited such an emotional response" that she wanted to show it as inspiration to future classes. So yeah, I left her a copy. And of course I appreciate her comments as well.

And finally, the cinematography class was incredibly well taught. If anyone ever has the chance to take Bill McDonald's class 150 at UCLA, do it. I'm still amazed at the breadth of subjects he taught in 6 weeks. With the knowledge I have, I'm now completely confident to go home, rent film gear and shot a picture!

I miss all the folks at home, and having a proper home too. Our garbage chute is clogged right now, so now 3 stories of garbage are piled up and no one can get rid of any garbage anymore. 515 Kelton Towers, I will not miss you, really.

Next time I visit, I'm living in the Palisades!

15 Comments:

Anonymous said...

is there any way you can patent your script before you give it to the TA? i can see him taking all the credit or or even stealing it...it is hollywood after all. did you have to sleep with him? j

8/08/2005 9:31 AM  
Poncho said...

Yea! Soon You guys will all be together and I can finally get a flippin CD! hehe kidding

I miss camp....I hope you guys have fun! (refering to Ian and Shane)

8/08/2005 12:45 PM  
imgonnacutyousobadthatyouwishididn'tcutyousobad said...

hey guys, ummm i would rather that you not make a cd, seriously i can wait. I have alot of patience. and if you could, don't post again, but if you must, i've been really digging the pic of butts. ohyeah, i kinda don't miss you at all

8/08/2005 2:47 PM  
Xerxes - Member of the Band said...

Ummm, maybe you should just NOT visit our site, NOT be so angry that your computer is missing it's Shift button, and, if you're looking for butts, I'm sure you can find them SOMEWHERE on the internet.

Good day to you, sir!

8/08/2005 5:12 PM  
Jason - Band Member said...

I will register the script with the Writer's Guild when it's finished, that offers some protection. But I don't think the TA would take it, he writes comedies and this is not a comedy.

I didn't have to sleep with him, but I did shake his hand.

Yes, the CD should be released in the early Fall! We can't wait either.

Cut person, you have a sad, small existence. But you entertain me, so there's something on the positive side of the ledger!

8/08/2005 7:58 PM  
Snake Man said...

Hey Jason, your horn called. Asked if you'd please stop tooting it.

No, I'm kidding, it was actually your mother. We have a date tomorrow night.

Also, I'm jealous.

8/08/2005 11:59 PM  
Jason - Band Member said...

Snakeman --

You should go out there for a summer session, seriously. . . it'd be much easier for someone in college, they have dorms and you don't have to rent an off-campus apartment. It costs some money, but it's totally worth it. Also, if you don't want to actually go out there, they have online courses, let me know if you're interested and I'll send you some of the emails about them.

8/10/2005 11:19 AM  
Snake Man said...

yeah man, send it. i'll give you my secret untracable address that i don't mind posting on the internet: ilikefieldhockey@yahoo.com


(that's seriously the address)

8/10/2005 6:00 PM  
Robin said...

Snake Man--I happen to be a VERY close friend of Jason's Mom~and she doesn't have a date with you. Also, Jason doesn't ever toot his horn (he wasn't that great at playing the sax); if he tells what he is doing, it's actually many times greater than he says.

8/10/2005 6:29 PM  
Poncho said...

Hey does anyone remember that post with that site that people send their secrets on postards to?

If anyone hasen't noticed All-american rejects use it in their new music video dirty little secret... So was that whole site for that band or something?

It puzzles the mind.... the burn is deep ow so deep

8/10/2005 6:37 PM  
iamgonnacutyousobackthatyouwishididn'tcutyousobad said...

snakeman - be more considerate next time, invite jason to accompany you on the date. think man, it's only the nice thing to do.

xerxes-maybe you should NOT talk, shut it

jason-there's really nothing i can do with my small existence, i live in a tin can and my bed is a match box. crickets are my main form of transportation, but hopefully i can afford of a grasshopper soon.

8/11/2005 5:21 PM  
Kasey said...

*shakes head* some people just have to take out their anger anonymously so that they feel better with their sad sad life.

I really hope you have more to do with your life than to make such rude comments on a blog.

8/11/2005 10:26 PM  
Childish said...

This is why i no longer comment on the lookers blog. They become bloody fascist. When have personal attacks and offensive jokes become something that is not done and looked down on?

We all know snakeman didn't have a date with jason's mom, it was a joke. i mean just the thought of him having a date period, is funny stuff.

And cutboy, people are telling him that his life is not worth living, b/c he was messing with you guys. He really has no reason to live and should end for all our sakes, but we shouldn't tell him that. It's rude.

Now think about that you totalitarian, tyrannical wankers.

8/12/2005 10:47 AM  
Ian - band member said...

I'm with Childish here. I was cracking up reading cut boy. Can't you recognize sarcasm? Honestly now, we deserve some of it too. Seeing as we are scattered all around the world, we haven't hardly updated this blog at all.

Also, I don't see how sarcasm makes somebodies existence small. I thought it was funny.

Casey, I appreciate you standing up for us. However, I think we can take it. Right now anything that would liven this blog up is welcome.

Jase, welcome home! I can't wait to rock.

Childish, very funny snake man comments.

Poncho, we're having a swell time. We miss you though.

8/12/2005 4:50 PM  
Jason - Band Member said...

Someone who talks about "cutting people bad" on the internet, even if sarcastic, does need to get out a little more and live a fuller life. That's my opinion. Everything else is funny, but come on the cutting part is just plain creepy and pathetic.

Now the line about grasshoppers being transportation and all that, that's funny.

8/12/2005 10:31 PM  

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